I'm diggin it so far, I do like an after mission breakdown and seeing the characters act a fool since they are in a comfortable setting. I will say it's an interesting choice to not have Nora talk to Yani about the bomb considering that is the sole factor for the "failure" of the mission. Of course if this will be a character develpment for Nora to train up the squad that would be dope but it does seem like an oversight as a reader and makes the events seem more isolated per chaper vs carrying on in the background as past events that can shape future dialouge and decision making. I love the dynamic that is being built and…
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I agree with all points and flash backs are going to be an important storytelling vehicle for me so I’ll definitely keep what you said in mind. I will say the fact that aminos acknowledged but still ignored is intentional.
I'm diggin it so far, I do like an after mission breakdown and seeing the characters act a fool since they are in a comfortable setting. I will say it's an interesting choice to not have Nora talk to Yani about the bomb considering that is the sole factor for the "failure" of the mission. Of course if this will be a character develpment for Nora to train up the squad that would be dope but it does seem like an oversight as a reader and makes the events seem more isolated per chaper vs carrying on in the background as past events that can shape future dialouge and decision making. I love the dynamic that is being built and…